Things
to Do in the Classroom with a Picture Poetry Book
By Elaine Magliaro
Author of Things
to Do
I was an elementary school teacher for more than
thirty years. I loved sharing poetry with my students! I also loved teaching
them how to write poetry. One kind of poem my students enjoyed writing was a
"things to do" list poem.
When I write my own "things to do" poems,
I imagine what it might be like to be something other than myself: a lion or
whale, a cat or dog, the sun or moon, rain or snow, a bus, a lawnmower, a sled
whooshing down a hillside--even a pot on top of a hot stove cooking up beef
stew.
Once I choose the subject for a "things to
do" poem, I make a list of the things that animal, element of nature, or
inanimate object might do--as well as words that describe it. I use that list
to help guide me as I write my poem.
One day, I wondered what it might be like to be a
pencil. I jotted down a "pencil" list before I wrote my poem:
·
shiny, yellow
·
pink eraser on top
·
sharp, pointed
·
writes stories and poems
·
leaves a track on paper
·
tip of pencil could be like toes
My THINGS TO DO IF YOU ARE A PENCIL poem:
Be sharp.
Wear a slick yellow suit
and a pink top hat.
Tap your toes on the tabletop,
listen for the right rhythm,
then dance a poem
across the page.
When I was working on my book Things to Do, I tried to select
verbs that best described the actions of the things that I was writing poems
about. For example, in my RAIN poem, I
wanted my verbs to help readers hear sounds that rain makes and to help them envision
things that rain does: polka dot, freckle, whoosh, gurgle, patter, tap dance. Using strong verbs helps to make our writing come alive
for the reader.
THINGS TO DO IN THE CLASSROOM
Here are suggestions for some language
arts discussion and creative writing activities that you can do with your
students in the classroom using my book Things
to Do:
PRE-READING ACTIVITY
Instruct students to
pretend they are something other than themselves: a wild animal (like a lion,
dolphin, spider, or honeybee), a force of nature (like the wind, rain, or
snow), or an object in space (like the sun or moon). Ask each child to make a
list of the things they would do as their chosen animal, force of nature, or
object in space. Direct the students to share their lists with the class.
WHILE READING: TEXT-BASED QUESTIONS AND ACTIVITIES
Ask children to think about how
different animals move about and the kinds of things that they do. Elicit
responses from them. For example, in Things to Do, I wrote that a honeybee should FLIT among flowers and
SIP nectar for hours, a snail should SLIDE along a trail of slime, an
orb-spider should WEAVE a web and then WATCH and WAIT. Explain to students that
FLIT, SIP, SLIDE, WEAVE, WATCH, and WAIT are all verbs or action words.
Read Things to do if you are CRICKETS
and tell students to listen for and name the verbs that tell the things
that crickets should do (TUNE, BID, RUB, SING). List their responses on chart
paper. Next, reread the poems
about dawn, an acorn, and rain. Instruct students to pick out the verbs that
name the things that dawn should do. Then repeat the exercise for acorn and for
rain. Add their answers to the list of verbs on the chart paper.
AFTER READING: BRAINSTORMING AND CREATIVE WRITING
After
completing Things to Do, reread the poems about the honeybee, snail,
orb-spider, and crickets. Ask students to name the things those animals should
do. Have students go back to the lists they brainstormed during the pre-reading
activity and instruct them to add even more powerful, vivid verbs to their
lists.
Provide students with
some examples:
• Snake: SLITHER, SLINK, SLIP, SLIDE along the ground or through the
grass; HISS; STICK OUT its tongue to catch the scent of prey
• Gray Squirrel: SCAMPER, SCURRY, SKITTER up a tree trunk; SEARCH
for acorns; BUILD a nest in the top of a tree.
When students have finished their lists, ask them to share what
they wrote with the class. Then, ask them to choose an animal to write a
“things to do” collaborative class poem about. Once an animal is decided upon,
have the class brainstorm the things it should do and list them on a “Poem
Ideas Sheet” (a piece of chart paper). Elicit responses from students by asking
questions, such as:
- What kinds of things do you think the animal should do during the course of a day/night?
- How do you think the animal moves about?
On the Poem Ideas
Sheet, list all of the children’s responses. Read through them with students.
Ask children if they want to add anything. On a separate piece of chart paper,
lead the children in writing a collaborative class poem. Tell them to look at the
Poem Ideas Sheet and ask what might be the best way to begin their class poem.
NOTE: Tell them that the poem DOES NOT have to rhyme. When the class is
finished writing their collaborative poem, read through it with them. Ask if
there are any changes or additions they would like to make.
The next day, reread
the collaborative class poem with your students. Then tell students to choose
an animal to write their own "things to do" poem about. Have students
return to their seats to compose their poems.
When students finish
the final drafts of their poems, have them read them aloud in class.
Variations
Ask for volunteers to
read the sky and rain poems to the class. Begin a class discussion about what
the author thinks the sky and rain should do. Have students brainstorm about
the things the wind might do, and record their ideas on a Poem Ideas Sheet.
Next, lead the class in writing a collaborative poem about the wind, or ask
students to return to their desks and write their own Things to Do if you
are the WIND poems. When children are finished writing, have them share
their poems with the class.
Extensions
•
Print the collaborative
class wind or animal poem on a piece of paper and make photocopies of it. Have
children illustrate their copies of the poem. Let children take their copies of
the poem home to share with their parents.
•
Photocopy your students' individual "things to do" wind
poems or animal poems. Then staple or bind them into a packet for the children
to take home and share with their parents.
NOTE: I'm giving away signed copies of my book THINGS TO DO! I'll collect the names of people who have
commented on my posts during each week in April. The following day,
I'll draw a name from a bag. That person will be the winner. If you
comment on two posts, your name will be entered in the drawing twice, etc.
Drawing dates: April 8, 15, 22, 29--and May 1
**********
Happy National Poetry Month!
4 comments:
Great ideas, Elaine! Thanks for sharing.
Bridget,
That's the brainstorming and writing process that I used in my classroom when I was teaching elementary school. My students wrote some excellent "things to do" poems.
We'll be using this lesson to write a poem about our passion projects in 2nd grade! My topic is Maple syrup....here's how it starts:
THINGS TO DO IF YOU ARE MAPLE SYRUP
By sticky, smoky and sweet.
Don't be stingy,
pour your golden goodness
atop a pancake,
ice cream or yogurt.
Lots more work needed!!
Kim,
Great! I taught second grade for many years. It's a great age. Thanks for sharing your poem. I can't tell you how many drafts I did of some of the poems in my book.
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