Friday, May 3, 2019

DOUBLE DACTYLS about Fairy Tales & Children's Books



Here are some double dactyls that I wrote years ago. All of them are about children’s books and fairy tales. Not sure that I adhered to the poetic form perfectly. Still, it was fun writing them!

Higgeldy piggeldy
Charlotte Cavatica,
Writer and weaver,
Spun tales for her friend,

Wilbur, the runt pig
She nurtured and cherished.
That spider was loyal
And true to the end.


Higgeldy piggeldy
Vegan Pete Rabbit
Pilfered some lettuce
And carrots and kale.

Mister McGregor
Chased after that bunny
But Peter escaped
By the fluff of his tail.

 
Higgeldy piggeldy
Poor Sleeping Beauty
Slumbered for decades
Because of a spell.

Prince Charming knelt down and
Kissed the prone princess.
They married. They’re happy.
There’s no more to tell.

 
Higgeldy piggeldy
Sad Cinderella
Sat in the ashes
Bemoaning her fate.

Godmother fairy
Said: “Honey, don’t blubber.
My magic will score you
A rich, handsome mate.”

 
Higgeldy piggeldy
Beauty was grossed out
Watching the ugly Beast
Nnoshing raw boar.

“God,” she said, “can’t you please
Masticate quietly!
Dining with you is
A distasteful chore.”
 
 
Higgeldy piggeldy
Max was a "wild thing,"
Got into mischief,
Was sent to his room,
 
Kicked up a rumpus
With Like-minded wild things.
Some kiddies go crazy
Once they leave the womb.

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Click here for the definition of the Double Dactyl from The Poetry Foundation.

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Jama has the Poetry Friday Roundup at her wonderful blog Alphabet Soup.

6 comments:

jama said...

These are so much fun -- and beautifully written. They belong in their own book. :)

Ruth said...

Haha, these are great!

Linda B said...

Really clever, Elaine. It would be fun to share with students to see what they write with them as mentors.

Mary Lee said...

Very fun! Charlotte and Pete Rabbit are my favorites!

Kay said...

These are such fun! Now I want to try a double dactyl of my own.

Cheriee Weichel said...

These poems made my heart sing with laughter. They are charmingly brilliant. Thanks so much for sharing them.