I often find it difficult to capture an image/idea
that I have in my mind in words. Autumn is the time of year when I hear the
honking of geese that are heading south for winter. I have tried over the years
to write a poem about migrating geese—but I have never been really satisfied
with the results. Here are two versions of a “wild geese” poem that I wrote.
The first was written several years ago; the second was written earlier this
year.
One Poem Two Ways
WILD
GEESE #1
So
long…farewell. We’re on our way.
We
must depart. We can’t delay
Our
journey to a warmer clime.
Mother
Nature warned: “It’s time!”
We’re
heading south before the snow…
And
winter winds begin to blow.
We
leave you with our parting call—
Honk!
Honk! Honk!
That’s
the sound of fall.
WILD
GEESE #2
So
long…farewell. We’re on our way.
We
must depart. We can’t delay
Our
journey to a warmer clime.
Mother
Nature warned, “It’s time!”
Days
grow shorter. Trees grow bare.
Pumpkins
fatten. Frost nips the air.
We
know the signs. It’s time to go
Before
the sky fills up with snow.
But
we’ll return again next year
When
we can sense that spring is near.
We
leave you with our parting call—
Honk!
Honk! Honk! That’s the sound of
fall.
Here is one of my favorite fall
poems:
Something
Told the Wild Geese
by
Rachel Field, 1894-1942
Something
told the wild geese
It was time to go,
Though the fields lay golden
Something whispered, "snow."
Leaves were green and stirring,
Berries, luster-glossed,
But beneath warm feathers
Something cautioned, "frost."
It was time to go,
Though the fields lay golden
Something whispered, "snow."
Leaves were green and stirring,
Berries, luster-glossed,
But beneath warm feathers
Something cautioned, "frost."
Click here to read the
rest of the poem.
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Cari Best wrote a touching picture book about a
wounded goose that landed in her backyard. It is based on her own experience. A
photograph of the one-footed goose is included on the title page. The book was
beautifully illustrated by the late Holly Meade.
From the title page:
“Goose’s
story is true. She came on a Sunday. We could only guess about how she’d hurt
her foot…Whatever it was, the goose with one foot became our spring and then
our summer that year. Who would have thought she’d become our inspiration for
all times, too.”
Booklist gave Goose’s Story a starred review. Here
is an excerpt from that review:
“Best's
simple prose is rhythmic and beautiful, more poetic than much of the so-called
free verse in many children's books; and Meade's clear, cut-paper collages show
the drama through the child's eyes--the clamor of the flock against the New
England landscape through the seasons; the honking and jumping for the sky; and
one goose left behind, wild and beautiful, hurt, and strong.”
Unfortunately, the book is now out of print—but you
may be able to find it in your public or school library…or a used copy from an
online bookseller
A Family Movie about Migrating Geese
My five-year-old granddaughter Julia likes Fly Away Home, a 1996 movie starring
Jeff Daniels and Anna Paquin. Julia and I have watched the movie together a few
times.
NOTE: (Fly Away Home won the 1997 Broadcast
Film Critics Association Critics Choice Award as the Best Family Film, the 1997
Christopher Award (for family films), 1997 Young Artist Award in the category
of Best Family Feature – Drama, and the 1997 Genesis Award for Feature Films.)
Fly Away Home movie trailer:
Mary Oliver reading her poem Wild Geese
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Karen Edmisten has the Poetry Friday Roundup this
week.
6 comments:
I love hearing the geese flying overhead and honking. It's a beautiful way of saying goodbye to the year. Enjoyed your poems -- the details in the second one were very nice. And I love the Fly Away Home movie. I'll have to look for Cari Best's book. Happy Almost October!
I love that Rachel Field poem--it's so poignant. Thanks for sharing!
Just came from Little Willow's post about migrating birds! Cosmic connection!
I like the second version best.
Happy Fall!
We were talking about 'Fly Away Home' on twitter this week, because of this article about Sacha Dench from Wildfowl and Wetlands Trust, doing the migratory flight with the Berwick's swans - from Russia to UK. Very much like 'Fly Away Home'. http://geographical.co.uk/nature/wildlife/item/1891-swan-vistas-taking-to-the-air-to-solve-an-arctic-mystery
The extra detail you added in the second version enhanced your poem.
Both beautiful poems! Thank you for sharing the book and the movie connections as well. Now off to listen for the honking of the geese!
A delightful and full post full of goodies. I feel fat with the enjoyment of your words.
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