We’ve had some beastly summer weather in my neck of the woods this week. I’m not a lover of the heat. I much prefer
the cooler days of autumn. I cope as best I can when the temperatures rise into
the nineties.
Here is a poem I wrote many years
about a child finding a way to cope with heat in summertime.
COOL
POOL
The sun beats down.
It sears.
It scorches.
Sweating neighbors sit on porches
Sipping ice-cold lemonade
Waiting for the day to fade.
BUT
When I’m hot as steaming tea,
I stand beneath our maple tree,
Remove my sneakers, socks…and wade
Into a cool green pool of shade.
The sun beats down.
It sears.
It scorches.
Sweating neighbors sit on porches
Sipping ice-cold lemonade
Waiting for the day to fade.
BUT
When I’m hot as steaming tea,
I stand beneath our maple tree,
Remove my sneakers, socks…and wade
Into a cool green pool of shade.
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Amy has the Poetry Friday Roundup at her wonderful
blog Poem Farm.
9 comments:
Lovely thought, Elaine, but even the shade isn't helping much today in the Denver area. It's supposed to be close to 100. I'm drinking tea instead of lemonade, but it isn't helping much. Keep cool!
Wading in a cool green pool of shade -- so childlike, I can just picture it and feel it :).
Thank goodness for AC, I say, but I know lots of you folks up north don't have central AC. Couldn't survive the summer without it in VA.
I like how you contrast a kid's view of his "sweating neighbors" with his own clearly superior strategy ... well done.
I love the rhymes--scorches and porches! and I love the pool of shade!
Yes! Those last two lines got me. I love saying them out loud. Do you know Karen Hesse's COME ON, RAIN!? Your sweaty neighbors remind me of the mamas. Get cool!
I love the thought of "a cool green pool of shade." That is such a powerful visual. I may go dip my toes in some shade too!
I really enjoyed that. I like the heat, but the gorgeous sense of shade really spoke to me.
Memories of river dipping in the hot summer sun came back to me while reading! This is lovely.
I can almost taste the lemonade and feel the cool shaded grass on my bare feet. Thanks for sharing!
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