tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2373615867496327293.post7227954803844377935..comments2024-01-29T07:09:43.833-05:00Comments on Wild Rose Reader: Earthworms: An Animal Mask PoemElaine Magliarohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09829330276633865868noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2373615867496327293.post-39399770028975045972008-04-29T16:54:00.000-04:002008-04-29T16:54:00.000-04:00Charlotte,Worms that are twenty feet long? EW!!! P...Charlotte,<BR/><BR/>Worms that are twenty feet long? EW!!! Perish the thought!Elaine Magliarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09829330276633865868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2373615867496327293.post-19771349412037327022008-04-29T14:35:00.000-04:002008-04-29T14:35:00.000-04:00I like the poem, and I like the grit! But when eve...I like the poem, and I like the grit! <BR/><BR/>But when ever I hear a worm described as small, I think of the giant worms of elsewhere that are over 20 feet long...Charlottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11835101886202235868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2373615867496327293.post-15438660031742551092008-04-29T12:23:00.000-04:002008-04-29T12:23:00.000-04:00Jules,Thanks. I was hoping I'd get some feedback o...Jules,<BR/><BR/>Thanks. I was hoping I'd get some feedback on the poem's ending.<BR/><BR/>Yes, I have a collection of animal mask poems. It has about twenty-five poems. A few of the poems still need to have their endings tweaked a bit before I send out the manuscript.Elaine Magliarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09829330276633865868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2373615867496327293.post-13387069409219919072008-04-29T11:50:00.000-04:002008-04-29T11:50:00.000-04:00I like that ending. Linda's right -- children will...I like that ending. Linda's right -- children will delight in that. Are you saying you're going to work on publishing some animal mask poems, as in an anthology? Wee! Hope so.<BR/><BR/>Jules, 7-Imp (who, yes, probably sleep-blogs, not unlike sleep-walking)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2373615867496327293.post-30688170902564693612008-04-29T10:05:00.000-04:002008-04-29T10:05:00.000-04:00Jone,I had a hard time coming up with an ending fo...Jone,<BR/><BR/>I had a hard time coming up with an ending for that poem. I finally decided to sit down with the poem and my rhyming dictionary and to finish it yesterday.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Linda,<BR/><BR/>Thanks! Yes, "Earthworms" is both a mask and a list poem. Gummy worms sound like fun.Elaine Magliarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09829330276633865868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2373615867496327293.post-53648973596585842962008-04-29T09:42:00.000-04:002008-04-29T09:42:00.000-04:00Elaine, the list form works very well with your po...Elaine, the list form works very well with your poem. Children will love this poem especially if the teacher teams it with a gummy worm!<BR/>LindaLindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01786457482835741494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2373615867496327293.post-88927878103733009402008-04-29T08:33:00.000-04:002008-04-29T08:33:00.000-04:00I am smiling at the end of this poem. Earthworms a...I am smiling at the end of this poem. Earthworms are so remarkable.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com